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Post by Lin Ryder on Aug 5, 2011 11:06:19 GMT -5
I was just thinking one thing here when it comes to advancement in the game. It seems it's based on how many posts you have, so what you might want to do is say that it has to be valid posts, or something to make members stop spamming to get up to the posts required.
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Almare
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Post by Almare on Aug 5, 2011 11:08:05 GMT -5
Angel - I fully intend to join, so I can help with any other coding once I'm done with the registry.
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 11:11:28 GMT -5
@lin - Thats a good point I hadn't thought of that. I'll work that into the rules. I still have a few more things to add to the rules. Then I'm pretty sure I'm done. lol Almare - Aw thank you. Your doing a great job with the coding. I'm very grateful for the help you given me and for coding the site.
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Post by Pia on Aug 5, 2011 12:15:55 GMT -5
yeah you do that. but i dont know what kind of babies i'll have there. probably arabs. or quarter ponies... or something completely different.
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Post by Lin Ryder on Aug 5, 2011 13:13:39 GMT -5
I might very well join too It looks like it could be an amazing game. Looks like it's got alot of potential =)
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 13:44:38 GMT -5
It looks like it could be an amazing game. Looks like it's got alot of potential =) I hope so. I wanted to make a game that would grow as it went along. That gave the members something to look forward to, and work toward.
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 21:00:25 GMT -5
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Post by Odeon on Aug 5, 2011 22:44:47 GMT -5
Just trawling through the rules again, looking for typing errors.
OWNERSHIP "Your ranks are determined by the number of posts you have made."- as you only have one rank at a time, it should either be "Ranks are determined", so minus the your, or "Your rank is determined"
"Some businesses may have more than one owner, if you want to know if your business can have two owners PM the Admin (Angel)." Would flow better as two sentences, so change the comma to a full stop. Otherwise, add a joiner like ", so if you want to know"
"Associations may also have staff, however they will count toward Co-Founders associations." should be something like "will be counted as Co-Founders of the association" to make it flow better
"All post need to be valid (maybe use something like "related" rather than valid, to clear up what you actually mean) to the game. Members found to be making any spam or junk posts will have 10 posts removed from their their post count, and be given a warning."
HORSES "This site is opened to horses of all breeds, even mixes. " Should be "open" not opened
"Horses will age ont he first of each new year." Should be "on the" not "ont the"
"However, we do let member back breed, meaning you can have the foal be born in 2003 when its (it is) 2011."
"Horses can be trained in up to 4 disciplines, unless Racing horses then they may only be trained in racing. " The second part of this sentence would flow better if it was something like "however, racehorses may only be trained in racing" or "unless they are race horses, in which case they can only be trained in racing"
will have a trawl through the rest later. Mostly, it's just little mistakes. I'm just pedantic about spelling and grammar. XD
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 23:51:48 GMT -5
Thank you Odeon. This is just the help I need. lol Be all means keeping fixing my mistakes.
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Post by Odeon on Aug 7, 2011 2:59:58 GMT -5
Got a few more for you. Glad I could help BREEDING Mares can be breed (bred) between the ages of 4 and 30. Surrogate mares maybe (may be- two words)used, . not comma the foal will need to be listed for both mares. Horses should be breed (bred) using the 'Breed' link on the Equine Registry. Stallions can have how ever (however) many foals a year their owners wish them to have. SHOWING Horses can start showing under-saddle at the age of 3 years. (missed a word) Members may show their horses in All-Sim, but nor (not, not nor) in any other game. RACING Horses that are retired from racing can be retrained into another disciplines. - should be either "another discipline" or "other disciplines" ASSOCIATIONS If there are other staff who are going to be aloud (allowed, not aloud)to use the Association account, make sure the password is not the same as any private accounts. IMPORT & EXPORT Importing fee is $1,000 and horses must wait one weeks (week, not weeks)to start showing. Horses who have been bred with in (within, not with in) the game. , not full stopMust have the ok from their breeder(s) in order to be exported. The breeder(s) is who ever (whoever, not who ever)owned the sire and dam at the time the foal was born. If you are not a member and your horse was imported into the game, and you would like to export them. , not full stopPlease email Equine Star admin, Angel here. BANKING Once you have joined you must make your own bank account, which Should be approved with in (within, not with in)24 hours. And that's all that I could find. Hope this helps you out It's all very well and succintly written, hun. Good work. I'm quite keen to see this game open now! I'll bring my horde of cobbies with me. XD
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Post by Angel on Aug 7, 2011 12:03:12 GMT -5
Woohoo Thank Odeon.
I will be breeding Thoroughbreds, Irish Draughts and Irish Sporthorses. They will all ber showing in eventing, or one/two of its three parts.
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Post by Lin Ryder on Aug 7, 2011 15:00:06 GMT -5
I don't know what I'll focus on .. as usual lol .. probably stock horses for racing or working western, or thoroughbreds for racing.
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Post by Angel on Aug 7, 2011 17:06:20 GMT -5
The class list right now is made up of 24 types with 140 classes all together. So I'm sure there will be something for everyone. lol
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Post by Odeon on Aug 7, 2011 20:47:37 GMT -5
Whoot, whoot. Sounds awesome. At the moment, I've got driving horses, and one dressage baby. Secretly getting my little horde together to unleash upon the game when it opens If you want to breed any RIDs or ISHs from SIM lines, Angel, take a look at Saraid. I have a bunch of really old SIM horses from 2002 and before, that I'm bringing back to SIM. They have massive records, so most of them aren't up yet, but they will be, if you're interested in breedings. I'd love to have Saraid RID babies in ES, seeing as most of them come from the original ES (Equine Sense) back when it was around. Would be a nice way to come full circle. XD
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Post by Angel on Aug 7, 2011 21:36:04 GMT -5
Cool. I will have to look and see what you have. I have been rounding up a nice side herd of them. I have some SIM bred horses. The pride of Moon Run Stables, the barn i'm using in game, are for sure going to be Enter Sandman 2001 Grey Thoroughbred(Jockey Club) Stallion and Holkenstadt Apure 2009 Black Irish Draught Colt who is sired by Aloft (A SIM horse who had 2.3 million in LTE)
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