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Post by Angel on Jul 31, 2011 12:32:28 GMT -5
So I been working on the game for a while now. I'm almost done with it, I hope. lol I'm not the best speller or typer for that matter, and was wondering if any one had some time if they could look over the rules for me. They can be found here. Now none of the links work, and it is posting on my stables site. I didn't want any one seeing it yet lol. I am still working out some of the rules and such. So thing will more then likely change.
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Post by Pia on Jul 31, 2011 13:01:41 GMT -5
First thing that hits me is that the headline "starting" says "staring"
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Post by Remi B. on Jul 31, 2011 13:06:20 GMT -5
Okay, I am going to read through everything... Stuff that is spelled right is small, wrong is big and bold I put grammar stuff in there too haha. But I have to go to the store right now so this is all I got through. Starting(+t)Once you have registered on the forums (no comma + u) you must fill out the join form and post it on the join board. We will reply to your join post with in a few hours, at most a day. Members will also need to open a(-n) bank account (no comma) and registry account once they join.
Members start out with $200,000, 4 Horse Creation credits, 4 Free Imports, and a(+a) small farm. Members can only own 5 horses for the first month. After that you are welcome to own your rank limit, as long as you have enough stalls. Members will also get 25% off their first trip to 'ES Tack & Care'. The small farm will include the following.
50 Acres 1 - 100x200 Outdoor Ring 2 - 5 Acre Paddocks 2 - 1 Acre Paddocks 1 Barn - 10 Stalls (12x12) - Small Tack Room - Small Feed Room - 2 Wash Stalls
Ownership Members must be active for one month before they can own any type of business or association. The number of horses, businesses,(+comma) and associations a member can own are determined by their Rank on the forums (+u). Your (-their, +your) ranks are determined by the number of posts you(+s, -they, +you) have made. Some businesses may have more than(-e, +a) one owner, if you want to know if your business can have two owners (-is one) PM the Admin (Angel). Associations may also have staff, however they will count toward Co-Founders associations.
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Post by Angel on Jul 31, 2011 13:08:08 GMT -5
First thing that hits me is that the headline "starting" says "staring" -head/desk- Why do I always do it... then no matter how many time I look over it I never see it. See stupid stuff like that is why I need the help of the great people here at SAI.
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Post by Angel on Jul 31, 2011 13:13:12 GMT -5
Okay, I am going to read through everything... Stuff that is spelled right is small, wrong is big and bold I put grammar stuff in there too haha. But I have to go to the store right now so this is all I got through. Thank you so much. I know a lot of them will be little stupid things I just happen to over look. I know a lot of it has to do with my Dyslexia.
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Post by Pia on Jul 31, 2011 13:17:07 GMT -5
- then it says Members start out with $200,000, 4 Horse Creation credits, 4 Free Imports, and small farm. it should be "a small farm". - Their ranks are determined by the number of post they have made. - "post s" - Mares can be breed between the ages of 4 and 30. - "bred" - Horses should be breed using the 'Breed' link on the Equine Registry. - "bred" - Dont know if you know it, but there is nothing under the title "Hosting" - Importing fee is $1,000 and horses must wait one weeks to start showing. - "week" - Horses who have been bred with in the game. Must have the ok from their breeder(s) in order to be exported. - it should be a comma, not a period between these two sentences. - Money that is given prizes or anything else that is by the ES site its self will be given by staff. - "given as prizes" - Warning 2 - $5,000 fine & A weeks banning depending on the offense. - should be a not A. thats what i could find
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Post by Odeon on Aug 1, 2011 0:01:49 GMT -5
Warning 1 - a PM, explain why you are being warned, and how to fix it. - should be explaining
Looks great, by the way. Will be hanging around to sticky-beak when its finished. Been a little while now since I've been in a game, and this looks pretty spiffy so far, Angel.
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Post by Angel on Aug 1, 2011 10:27:36 GMT -5
Thank you Odeon. Once I'm ready to open it I will be posting an ad for it here at SAI. So keep a look out for it. lol
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Post by Angel on Aug 1, 2011 17:28:16 GMT -5
I am also looking for some help. I'm looking for some one(s) who would be willing to code, and run one of the shops. The coding would either have to be in PHP or HTML code. ES Tack & Care, ES Real Estate Office and ES Vet & Farrier. If you would be willing to help please PM me. Also note I'm going to be picky, you must have to want to be part of the game (an active player)
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Nicole
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Post by Nicole on Aug 5, 2011 0:41:38 GMT -5
I'll definately join when it's finished! Sorry, I wasn't much help
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 0:49:11 GMT -5
Aw. Its ok, I understand sometimes life gets in the way. And thank you for joining (Once its open).
I found this website I'm going to use to help me with the shops.
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Post by Odeon on Aug 5, 2011 2:54:52 GMT -5
If I was any good at PHP or creating HTML I'd love to help you out. Unfortunately, I'm PHP illiterate, and while I know how to upkeep HTML and do little changes, I suck at actually writing the darned stuff. XD But I'd be more than happy to help you run a shop when you've got the site open. I'm quite interested in joining. I love 'old style' SIMs.
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 9:44:48 GMT -5
Thats great Odeon. lol Once its open I'll be sure to poke at you lol.
I love the 'old style' sims too. There aren't any anymore so I had to make one... lol
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Post by Pia on Aug 5, 2011 10:44:08 GMT -5
even im thinking of joining with a small herd of... something that has four hooves
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Post by Angel on Aug 5, 2011 11:01:34 GMT -5
lol Great. I'm holding you to that Pia.
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